Sunday 31 January 2016

Script- Credit to Josh and Matthew

Josh and Matthew did the script.


Josh Coe: Tony (Everyman)
Heather McDonald: Victoria (Femme Fatale)

EXT. Road. Night

(Tony leaning against wall looking at empty wallet)

Tony: 
(voiceover)
(hopeless)
I lost it all, she took everything I had. I'm left with nothing but dreams, of what could have been.

(Tony tosses wallet away and walks off)



OPENING TITLE SEQUENCE 

Tony:
(voiceover)
(desperation)
Theres only one thing left to do, she deserves it.

(Tony stands behind wall to hide)

Tony:
(voiceover)
(with love)
This is the route she walks everyday, I'd never forget.

(Victoria becomes visible walking through the alley, a cigarette in hand)

Tony:
(voiceover)
(with hope)
She still looks as beautiful as she did the first time I saw her.

(Victoria walks past Tony but can't see him)

Tony:
(voiceover)
(more hate)
 She's blinded from the world, she deserves this.

(Victoria continues walking as Tony appears from the darkness)

Tony:
(aggression)
Hey Victoria!

(Victoria turns quickly and shock fills her face)

Victoria:
(Gasps)

(Tony pulls the trigger and the camera looms on the cigarette burning out)



I am happy with what Josh and Matthew came up with, i decided to leave it to Josh as he does A-Level Creative Writing and eve though i do it aswell, script work is not my strong point. Even though its very short but that is what we wanted as we didn't want a lot of talking. Now the script is done, we can now start filming as before Josh started on the script, Matthew was having trouble on what to write and we couldn't film until it was done.

1 comment:

  1. add some of your own input - add a reflective comment - what is it like to respond to a script someone elsehas written - did you have an input into the initial plans and discussions

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